Thanks!
Neutral
~ Just joined the forums recently
~ Doesn't meet age requirements
~ Detail, yet I see lots of grammar errors
you say you can add "dedication" try adding more dedication into your app to fix grammar errors
~ Reduce the amounts of "I(s)" used, everyone does this but you have lots that start with "I"
Thanks both of uNeutral
- Reasons Stated By Rqnsom
Thanks!, also liked ur app very detailed good luck+1
- Stated above
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LahMoney (Jack)