Denied SoftLuv's Staff Application

[Desconnect]

Deleted.

 

[GalaxyLova]

-1 no detail and no color scheme

 

[Desconnect]

-1 no detail and no color scheme

what you mean no detail? what can i add more off ill fix it up and tysm for the reply

 

[GalaxyLova]

what you mean no detail? what can i add more off ill fix it up and tysm for the reply

firstly you should make the color scheme look good for the eyes not bright colors
also not really detail sorry fix the grammar some I's are not capitalized and some words are misspelled

 

[Desconnect]

firstly you should make the color scheme look good for the eyes not bright colors
also not really detail sorry fix the grammar some I's are not capitalized and some words are misspelled

my bad man let me fix that and thanks alot for letting me know!

 

[Vxpor]

-1 No Detail

 

[Desconnect]

-1 No Detail

what can i add?

 

[xKarmma]

1+ (Changed from -1)

Edited

+ Colour scheme was added
+ More detail was added

Good luck!

 

[Desconnect]

-1

-Lack of detail
-Lack of experience
-Multiple Grammar errors
-Massive space at the bottom

can u please explain what you mean by "lack of experience" and "lack of detail" thank you for the reply tho!

 

[Desconnect]

-1

-Lack of detail
-Lack of experience
-Multiple Grammar errors
-Massive space at the bottom

And can u point out the "grammar errors" as i clearly missed them and i will be sure to fix right away !

 

[xKarmma]

You stated in your application that you have no experience?....
And by lack of detail i mean you have not written enough add more detail such as honesty scale or Loyalty, your competing with other applications make yours stand out.

Good luck!

 

[xKarmma]

can u please explain what you mean by "lack of experience" and "lack of detail" thank you for the reply tho!

“Iam” for starters and i don’t really wan’t to come off offensive, however 75% of your application has grammar errors which is way too many to point out. Please read your application thoroughly or copy and paste it onto google docs and google docs will immediately find your errors and help you fix them.

Once again good luck!

 

[Desconnect]

You stated in your application that you have no experience?....
And by lack of detail i mean you have not written enough add more detail such as honesty scale or Loyalty, your competing with other applications make yours stand out.

Good luck!

yeah true thanks very much karmma!!!

 

[xKarmma]

yeah true thanks very much karmma!!!

No problem!

 

[Daxman24]

-1
- Stated Above

 

[Desconnect]

-1
- Stated Above

Fixed!

 

[Desconnect]

No problem!

Cheers again karmma and its fixed now!

 

[Docents]

decent app

 

[Desconnect]

decent app

Thank you very much!

 

[Vaht]

-1