thank you so much for the feedback, I'll make sure to edit it.Honestly your application is quite standard, the only thing that could be adjusted is how you display your personality, surely you're not some robot who follows all directions and have never slipped up before right?
Other than that, I wish you great luck with the application.
Thank you ill change that right now+0.5, it looks like a decent application but I would but a little more detail into why you want to be staff and why we should choose you.