Denied HaBloh's Staff Application

[R0CE]

0.5

Lacking detail

 

[Ties]

+0.5

Grammar needs work.

Good luck!

 

[qjz]

Neutral

 

[HCFSkybridge]

In my opinion, you have a beautiful application. However it seems like you are going fairly off-topic in “What can you do to improve the player’s experience”. You start acting like it’s “What puts you apart from other applicants”. I normally don’t comment on other applications, but this one grabbed my attention. I feel like if you fix that issue and layout the questions so they stand out more you will have an amazing application!

 

[Frath]

In my opinion, you have a beautiful application. However it seems like you are going fairly off-topic in “What can you do to improve the player’s experience”. You start acting like it’s “What puts you apart from other applicants”. I normally don’t comment on other applications, but this one grabbed my attention. I feel like if you fix that issue and layout the questions so they stand out more you will have an amazing application!

Ok, Thank you for your response.

 

[Tannin]

-1 stated

 

[Quick]

-1
Lacking Information / Server Hopper
If both accepted im excited to be working with you.

 

[bannedforcheats]

-1

• Lack of Detail

banned

 

[Regrets]

Neutral
Would love for you to add more information as to what you learned during your experience at the different servers

 

[Frath]

+0.5
decent detail
decent experience

Thank You.

 

[Botings]

Congratulations, your application has been set to Pending!

Please connect to ts.sagepvp.org for an interview.