Denied Deleted.

[Elude]

Deleted.

Not interested in applying for Sage anymore.

 

[Elude]

Just a quick notice, I had to create a new account on the SagePvP forums, I did not remember my old forums password. Feel free to ask any questions. Feedback is greatly appreciated.

 

[TaxLimit]

-+ Neutral

- I noticed you need some help with grammar, sentences are usually 20-25 words, you made them 6 words.

- I didn't really get fully after reading "Why do you want to become a staff" why you want to be one, I get that you like helping people, but what else.

Other than that I think you'd be fine, just polish up that grammar and put in more detail on that one question and I'll +1 for sure, Good Luck!

-Tax or Embolism <3

 

[R0CE]

Neutral,

Be honest bro it just looks like you copied and pasted your old app.

Particles

It's no longer staff here. Also, I would put more detail “Why would you like to become a staff member?:”.

With passion,
R0CE

 

[NiceStrafes]

Neutral

 

[Elude]

Neutral,

Be honest bro it just looks like you copied and pasted your old app.
It's no longer staff here. Also, I would put more detail “Why would you like to become a staff member?:”.

With passion,
R0CE

You can go look at my old app, which is almost 5 months ago. I dont think that old app would meet the requirements, but thanks for the feedback.

 

[Elude]

-+ Neutral

- I noticed you need some help with grammar, sentences are usually 20-25 words, you made them 6 words.

- I didn't really get fully after reading "Why do you want to become a staff" why you want to be one, I get that you like helping people, but what else.

Other than that I think you'd be fine, just polish up that grammar and put in more detail on that one question and I'll +1 for sure, Good Luck!

-Tax or Embolism <3

I fixed the mistakes. I'm still working on some. Thanks for the feedback

 

[Elude]

Neutral

What can I do better?

 

[Llamass]

+1
Like the app
Goodluck!

 

[Hayh]

Good application but you need to work on your grammar

 

[Serae]

-1

I read that and half of the things didn't make sense lol

 

[wpo]

Neutral

 

[Sauds]

Neutral gl

 

[Elude]

+1
Like the app
Goodluck!

Thank you

 

[Elude]

Neutral gl

Thanks for the feedback, what can I work on??

 

[Elude]

Neutral

What can I work on?

 

[Elude]

Good application but you need to work on your grammar

Ok thank you. Im working on that now!

 

[Elude]

-1

I read that and half of the things didn't make sense lol

I've read my application over again, you were right. I fixed some mistakes, but I am working on the others right now.

 

[Serae]

I've red my application over again, you were right. I fixed some mistakes, but I am working on the others right now.

I’ve “red” you can’t even spell that right oml

 

[Elude]

I’ve “red” you can’t even spell that right oml

Mistakes happen when you are typing man.