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your experience list is longer than the open ended questions
if you need good details as to what the server was that you were staffing on, don't write a whole 3 paragraphs, it's harder to read
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- unnecessary detail in previous experience(even getting some of the facts about the server wrong, etc. sotw is on SUNDAY and not SATURDAY)
- bad format
You don't need that much detail in the staff experience section, try and make it the other way around, I will change my feedback when you manage to do this. Best of luck!