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+1 Cool guy, will actually upload, deserves it.

-.5 Maybe wait 3 years, as you do not meet the age requirement. Also, you do not have a much experience, and there is a lack of detail. On the plus side, you are not toxic and are a friendly, genuine person. Goodluck! -------------------------------------- IGN: Confunction Rank: Builder /...

+1 I can tell you are really inspired by sage. You seem to also bring creativity which would be a great help in the SagePvP Staff Team. Another reason I’m giving you the + is because you actually seem dedicated. I can tell you spent time on this, and good luck. -Confunction

+.5 I think you seem pretty good, just need a bit of guidance and help from other builders, which is what you would get on the sage build team. That build you make was pretty nice too, just needs a few touch ups and more interesting parts. Good luck -Confunction

-1 I can tell you tried, at least a little bit, but you clearly did not revise. There are a few grammatical errors and a few spelling mistakes which makes this hard to read. Another this I advise you to do is add commas in between some longer sentences, or just add a period. Good luck -Confunction

IGN (In Game Name): Confunction Age: 15 Do you have TeamSpeak: Yes. I am pretty active in the Sage TeamSpeak. Telegram name: @Confunction Previous Work (Portfolio): I have screen shots of around 3-5 of my builds on my computer. I will show them if accepted on to the interview stage. Past...

-1 I’m not sure if this was a joke, but the grammar is horrible, there is no elaboration anywhere, and you are using abbreviations. -Confunctions

-1 Im reading this and I can tell it didn’t take you long. You should elaborate everywhere, but make sure your typing what you want to and not making grammatical mistakes. Good luck -Confunction

-1 If you would like to get staff, I believe you should put time into making an application that you admire yourself. This clearly took you a few minutes. I advise you to make a more detailed, elaborate application, and try again in a few weeks. Good luck -Confunction

-1 I am giving you this rating because it seems like this did not take much effort to make. There is also a lack of detail in many spots such as “Why would you like to become staff” and in the question “What past experiences do you have”. Good luck -Confunction

Neutral Just as I advised speederz, do not reply if someone is being toxic, as it is childish. Good luck -Confunction

-1 Remember, you can always edit your work. Also you double posted and it looks like you did not spend much time on this. Good luck -Confunction

-1 The reason I’m giving you this rating is because you wrote so much. Sometimes writing a lot is a good thing, but in this case, I don’t think so. Just remember, quality before quantity. It is also very hard to read it all as it is so long. I also advise you to squeeze your past experiences...

-1 If you would like to change this rating to a neutral or higher, just add more elaboration on your “do you have any past staff experiences”. Good luck. -Confunction

-1 I personally gave you this rating due to many things. First off, there is a lack of detail in every question. Secondly, you need to elaborate more. Weither or not you get accepted, I wish you good luck. -Confunction

-1 I’m giving you this rating just solely on he fact that you do not meet the age requirement. You must be 15 years or older to apply for staff. -Confunction

-1 I’m giving you this rating due to thre amount of grammatical errors, and the fact that you don’t seem mature. You don’t seem mature when you are applying for a staff position, and you are clearly not revising what you wrote. I advise you to add more detail, fix your answers, and try again...

-1 I’m giving an honest opinion here. From what I read, some of this information is a bit of a stretch for usefulness. Another reason is that there is a lack of detail in multiple places such as in “Why do you want to be staff”, and in “Do you have any past experiences as a staff member”. Either...

-1 for the reasons stated above. I get the feeling that the color scheme makes you look childish.

Thanks for the feedback before, but I know he is sometimes on while I am, but not most of the time. thanks, I was just wondering what’s wrong with the color scheme, and where there is little detail, again, thanks.