Doesn't mean that you changed the unnecessary detail or grammar mistakes. I recommend that you go for smaller servers. I still think you're toxic but that's just an opinion.
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Tons of grammar mistakes
Bad past experience
No staff experience (go for smaller servers)
Very toxic
Unnecessary detail
Super hard to read
Goodluck!
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- Hard to read
- More detail on sections "Why do you want to become Staff" and "Why should we accept you as a Staff?"
- Remove the weird font
- Grammar mistakes
Goodluck!